Sunday, January 10, 2010

HW #.33 paper outline

Thesis: we are all trying to be cool or thinking of how to be cool, just thinking of how to be cool leads us to the feeling emptiness

Paragraph 1: we care what people think
Whenever we want to do anything, we think people are looking at us, we think of what people are going to say and think (f that something we going to do )efore we even think if we feel comfortable doing it are self’s
We care of who r we going to be seen walking with, r talking to, like why? Why don’t we just stop caring?

Paragraph 2; we love attention
we try to get other people attention because when everyone looks at me and laugh at my jokes then I am the coolest then anyone would be my friend, do some weird stuff ,some people dress in a weird way to get attention make fun of anyone so people can laugh and get attention to be cool. We don’t care about other people feelings, all I care about is people laughed for me and now IM COOL

Paragraph 3:trying to be cool, makes us uncool.
When we try to be cool, we just get confused on what we are going to do to make us look cool in front of people, but when we just lets it go and not think of trying to be cool then you just be cool.

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